Tuesday, January 19, 2010

January 19, 2010


123 Beauty Drive
Skii boo ski, British Columbia
Canada SKI BOO


Mr. Cleats at Central High School 123 Main Street,
Sportstown, British Columbia,
V2A 1W3

Dear Mr. Cleats

Hello Mr. Kleats my name is Juice Springsteen, the father of Tan Jovi who is currently on your extreme ironing team.

It has been brought to my and other parents attention that the practices and games are taken too seriously. We as parents are aware that your job is very difficult and sometimes frustrating. However we feel that some things would be better off changed. As a parent I’ am making an effort to arrive Tan Jovi on time to games and practices. It would be greatly appreciated if you could make such an effort to arrive on time as well. To have a successful team we as parents think it is vital to have organized practices. We also understand that it may be difficult to do so, but after attending practices we parents feel practices could be more organized. During games the more under skilled players on the team are getting little ironing time and it is vital to their skill development to iron equally as the other players. If the kids make a mistake or play poorly we have noticed that sometimes profane language is used. It would be appreciated if language could be used in a positive matter encouraging the kids along. Our final concern as parents is the emphasis placed on winning. As a very competitive person myself I know how important it is to win. If less emphasis could be put on the winning aspect of the game and rather the players effort that would make the team morale increase.

Thank you for your time Mr. Kleats, and considering our concerns.

Sincerely,




Juice Springsteen

1 comment:

  1. Good effort. All assignments complete. Writing is quite polished. Narrative essay is a bit goofy, I'm sure you won't do that on your provincial. Good luck on the final.

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